Hi my names thomas i am 11 and i am in the digatel class at mokoia intermediate.in my spare time i like to swim play tennis do hockey and play water polo.
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Monday 10 June 2013
Children run crazy for kid’s cancer
Children run crazy for kid’s cancer
Kids run a gruelling 7 km on a hilly cross county at a steady pace to
raise funds for kid cancer.
Nice work but need more about the day and catchy title also you forgot the m in 7km and who was the first in the different year groups? That would be good Blaire
Hey Thomas, I think your work is fantastic. It could have been much more detailed though. You forgot the ‘m’ in km. When was the cross country? I am curious. Did you complete it? Anyway, good article. Finn
Nice work but need more about the day and catchy title also you forgot the m in 7km and who was the first in the different year groups? That would be good
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Hey Thomas, I think your work is fantastic. It could have been much more detailed though. You forgot the ‘m’ in km. When was the cross country? I am curious. Did you complete it? Anyway, good article.
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